[commentary] fractionation

omfg i just realised i forgot to switch out the placeholder title for a better one why am i always posting fic in like a crazed rush... this morning i started rereading it in the cold light of day and saw i used 'pointed'/'pointedly' like three times in a single paragraph that's honestly what i get for taking SIX FUCKING MONTHS to write this bitch. i cannot believe i thought i would be done in march and now it's AUGUST but at least i finally won 
( lots of rambling under cut )